Yesterday, through one of my new writing friends, I heard about Susanna Leonard Hill’s 1st Annual Valentiny Writing Contest. The rules were pretty simple, come up with a short story 214 words or less (2/14, get it?) that includes a grumpy character. Always up for a challenge, I couldn’t pass up the opportunity to enter. While I managed to hit the exact word count, I’ll admit it was a little tricky to write a complete story in so few words, but here’s my finished product:
Henry’s Valentines – 214 Words
Henry kicked rocks and muttered under his breath, “Who needs a Valentine anyway? Not me!” he declared as he trudged home from school.
Besides, Valentines were nice and friendly and Henry…he wasn’t always the nicest kid in third grade.
“Come on Slowpoke,” he sometimes laughed when Oscar was the last to finish a race.
“Ouch!” he made Clara cry when he tugged her ponytail.
He even made fun of Sam yelling, “Hey four-eyes!” when Sam showed up to school with new glasses.
“Kids like me don’t get Valentines,” Henry grumped as he stomped into the house and threw his books on the counter. “I don’t know how to be a good friend,” he confessed; but then he had an idea…
Henry’s brows furrowed as he cut, glued, glittered, and colored. His lips pursed as he traced, laced, painted, and sketched. “Perfect!” he said at last.
The next morning, Henry clutched a paper bag close to his chest. Mrs. Mitchell’s eyes widened and she smiled as she peered into the bag Henry placed on her desk.
“Looks like everyone has been hard at work,” she said handing out the Valentines.
“Wow!” remarked Oscar.
“Pretty!” exclaimed Clara.
“Cool!” cried Sam.
The entire class loved Henry’s Valentines…but he was too busy admiring his own pile to notice.
Are you up for the challenge, too? If so, be sure to enter today – the deadline for entry is Friday, February 12th. Good luck!
Aww, I’m glad Henry figured out how to spread some Valentine’s cheer! Sweet story!
Thank you, Gabi and thanks for reading! 🙂
Teresa, your story is adorable and it has such a fitting end! Clever!
I’m glad you enjoyed it and thank you, Dawn!
Very cute story.
Thanks, Gregory! 😊
Adorable story, Teresa. I’m glad Henry realized how to have Valentiny fun. I wish you the best of luck.
Thanks for your comments, Robyn and thanks for visiting my page! 😊
This was fanastic! It reminds me of my grumpy boy (although I think mine is usually pretty nice).
And you pulled it together so fast! 🙂
Thanks, Marla! I think we all have a case of the grumps from time to time, but I’m sure your boy is an angel. 😊
Very cute story, hurrah for Henry in the end!
Thanks and thanks for reading, Jean!
Aww, heartwarming. Good job, and good luck 🙂
Thank you, Christie! 🙂
Henry solves his own problem. Bravo!
Thanks so much, Laura!
What a great story, Teresa…Henry is an excellent mc…I loved reading along as he showed his inner feelings and changed at the end and was rewarded by a pile of Valentines of his own.
Thank you for your comments, Vivian! I’m glad you enjoyed Henry’s story! 🙂
I loved how lovable Henry is, even when he isn’t always nice.
Thank you, Jen and thanks for taking the time to read! 🙂
So glad Henry figured out how to make up for his not-always-so-nice behavior by making Valentines… and that his thoughtfulness paid off in pleasing his teacher and classmates and in getting Valentines himself! He’s a very believable kid character! Thanks so much for joining in the Valentiny fun, Teresa!
Thank you, Susanna! This was such a fun contest. Thank you for hosting it and I can’t wait for the next one! 🙂